Development 3 - Article Designs Continued
> It's hard not to get convoluted with ideas between each article and aesthetic
> The babestation inspired camgirl site with collage definitely works
> Having the computer boxes to represent a deeper insight into the works behind the cam girl life through a system perspective also technically works but does it aesthetically work or make sense?
> Stuck on the red section as well as the images do not lend themselves to the same aesthetic, rounded images not very digital or camgirl website
> Need to bring the last sections together with the first sections, which means more
= old computer and technology visuals
= more computer errors at start of article?
PEER FEEDBACK
> Definitely feels cohesive as a whole and has a sense of journey towards the computer errors
> If you're worried then you can bring in the elements that work at the top down to the bottom
> Tonally different, porn site at the top and digital at the bottom
> Not a bad transition if it's telling a story
> Little flashing ads or more bars could help tie them together
> Once I recognised that I was leading to errors on purpose as a way of presenting things getting more freaky, people more desperate, ell having to reject more and more requests and the overall lockdown digital sexual frustration tone, I took this further in the aesthetic as it progresses further down
> Starts off as porn inspired aesthetic, and gradually presents things glitching out, error messages, porn website system messages and preferences
> Visuals become more distorted, imagery is more freaky and almost alien-like
> It moves from playful bold sexual tone towards a more freaky, hedonistic erotic tone, reflecting how the requests between lockdown from before and during have changed for ell in her services
- Joely article page


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