Outcome Presentation Development 2

 































> Pictures are better than first series but as involving both Ell and James to take these pictures still do not follow within what would be an elevating presentation, I need to be involved in the process and direct the photographers on how I want them done

> I assume they know how to do it but this is presumptuous

> Having book on stand does present the book more as an art artefact which is appropriate for the brief, but without a birds eye view and being so far away the actual publication cannot be read 

> The stand could have been covered in velvet itself, as it is a central part of the image more thought could have been put into this as it takes a lot of the focus away from the pages. 

> Additional pictures of condom box I also asked for are good and present this more individually as an additional output, but having it be opened and showing someone interacting with this would be a better presentation 

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